Poetry - Madness

Crying when i should laugh over my sanity

drowned by this madness, this vanity

standing on the edge of reason

disturbed, i turn away

surviving  this change of seasons

as night turns into day



I bury this feeling inside my brains

oh God, please let it rain

on this dry land of my emotions

give some rhythm to my devotion

let this madness resonate my being

as my sanity caught the last train

on a one way path to destruction

on a one way path to destruction.

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misslee 5 years ago from Beverly Hills, CA

I keep rereading your work, and though it is sad I can't help but smile, I suppose because it resonates with me...


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

thanks. and ironically, most people don't like it cause its too depressing for them. but i guess thats the way i write.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

This is actually pretty talented work, and I perfectly understand the sadness in it. Nothing wrong with emotional poetry man

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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

when you look in the mirror and see what you dont like staring back at you,

you turn away in disgust...

or maybe you turn away because you know that you do like it...

the madness...the self destruct.

~nikkij


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

lol. your comment is deeper than my whole freakin poem :P


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

haha!

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