The Coming Revival ( a poem of hope)

Sometimes natural events occur out of our seemingly dictatorial control...
Sometimes natural events occur out of our seemingly dictatorial control...


The time has come, as this course now has run, changes, inevitably brought,

This country once was great, now what is our fate, as the answers sought.

Greed and corruption the main rules, as we are as tools, wars we've fought,

Is there a better way, for us to live each day, not perplexing to find, a thought.

The more we try to force evil deeds upon this earth...the stronger the resistance and overwhelming  results...to unfold...
The more we try to force evil deeds upon this earth...the stronger the resistance and overwhelming results...to unfold...


Mother Liberty's tears are shed, and now comes the times we dread, as our last,

Should Lincoln to have died in vain, to see us now, great pain, as the die is cast.

All the grand in history to fall, just one more chance, our last call, from the past,

Our time is getting late, discard vices to perpetuate, this storm before the mast.


This storm in our ship of life, before the mast...
This storm in our ship of life, before the mast...


We must breach the coming storm, overcome in any form, not reach for a star,

Humanity can't wait, to relax or hesitate, futures to to begin here, not from afar.

We must find the powerful wind, our ship of life to send, our waiting sails to fill,

Putting aside all greed, the hate, regain our nation, once great, retake the wheel.

Overcome the trials and tribulation that threaten every nation...to atone...
Overcome the trials and tribulation that threaten every nation...to atone...


Time to announce the arrival, of this our greatest revival, a most profound event,

Renounce the evilness, the things that send us amis, without our own consent.

Stand up, be counted as strong, show the world that we belong, in a human race,

Strength to move mountains, to atone, one small seed, not alone, together faced.


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We must right our ship of life and carry on...
We must right our ship of life and carry on...

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Ericdierker 5 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Perfect timing as we face choices on how to move forward and not backward. We shall overcome.


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whonunuwho 5 months ago from United States Author

Thank you Eric and I do hope that what I write is inspirational to all who read. Many blessings my friend. whonu


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Missy Smith 5 months ago from Florida

This is perfection Whonu. I totally felt the power in your words with this message to our world. A most important message spelled out in an extremely beautiful tone. I loved it! Inspiring! I hope many read this. :)


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whonunuwho 5 months ago from United States Author

I must say your own letter gave me the inspiration to write. Thank you. whonu


Michael Milec 5 months ago

So timing, God is counting on us - His - people right now - every time - is right time now . Thank you whonunuwho.


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whonunuwho 5 months ago from United States Author

You are welcome my friend. Thank you for your response. Yes our god wants us all to stand up and show that we care. whonu

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