The Problem Was What I Thought (limerick)

I just wasn’t feeling so hot

So my doctor’s advice I sought

He ran tests on me

Till cause was set free

I suffered what he called a thought


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

That is quite a burden to carry. :)


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lovebuglena 3 years ago from Staten Island, NY

Not sure if the flow was perfect but I still enjoyed the limerick. Thank you for sharing.

You seem to be a lover of limericks. If you write enough of them (or maybe you already have enough written) you can gather them together in a book. :)


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

A thought, oh my, poor guy . . . lol


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Hmmmmm well a thought to take care to be fit enough not to go to Doc again.......best wishes....thank you for this one also. Votes up funny and shared.


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Thinking can be dangerous to one's health.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Thinking to much will give us a headache but I am glad that it gave you the notion to compose this great Limerick.Have a great day.

Eddy.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Got to watch those thoughts. They can rear up and bite you, when you least expect it!!

I like your sense of humor.

DJ.


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

Don't fret, Martin, it happens to the best,

Just think of it as an intelligence test.


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Thoughts can be a problem - nice to have it confirmed....


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midget38 3 years ago from Singapore

Ah, we all need a doctor when we think too much! Thanks for sharing, Hatter!


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Food for thought. Lovely!


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Thought scan get out of controlling the mind take care on that note

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