Only You: A Poem

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I probably shouldn't think of you as much as I do,

But thinking leads to feeling; I like the way I feel about you,


Your smile is contagious though I don't see it very often,

It's pointless to fly on high hopes; I should nail them in a coffin,


This unrequited love will shred my heart to painful parts,

Cupid's arrows are menacing, like fiery, poisonous darts,


The only time you think of me is when you're bored or a little curious,

You ask me questions and my feeble mind just makes me furious,


I guess we'll always be friends, if you count conversations online,

But friendship seems more than brutal to a lonely heart like mine.


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lcbenefield 4 years ago from Georgia

Good write perfectly conveying feelings of lonliness and doubt. Thanks for sharing. Voted up. I escpecially like the last two lines.


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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

well job done...i enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. votes up and shares:-)


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Ebower 4 years ago from Georgia Author

lcbenefield: Thank you; I'm glad I succeeded in displaying those emotions. Thanks for voting!

dghbrh: I'm happy you enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Wow Ebower, this is wonderfully expressed. I can feel the loneliness in the words, excellent poetry. Voting up, and rating beautiful and interesting :)


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Ebower 4 years ago from Georgia Author

Olde Cashmere: Thanks so much! I appreciate you voting.


Valleypoet 4 years ago

A very heartfelt poem, and cleverly worded lines. Voted up!


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Ebower 4 years ago from Georgia Author

Valleypoet: Thank you! I'm glad this struck you as heartfelt and clever.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

A desert. I hope this is just an expression. Good work. Thank you


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Ebower 4 years ago from Georgia Author

Mhatter99: Thank you! I enjoyed writing this; I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.


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UMHiram 3 years ago from Midwest

Great, heartfelt and honest poem ... voted up!


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Rusti Mccollum 3 years ago from Lake Oswego, Oregon

I felt for you in this poem, well I'm hoping it's not your heart. I enjoyed it though. It touched me. Great poem!


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

UMHiram: Thank you for voting and commenting!

Rusti Mccollum: I have felt this way before. I guess pain is my inspiration sometimes. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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