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Just Published my first Hub

  1. bbgolfer profile image70
    bbgolferposted 4 years ago

    Dears

    I have just my first Hub in Hubpages, I will try to create as many hubs as I can to share my knoledge about the topic I am passionate about "Golf".

    Please have a look to my Hub and give any improvement suggestion

    http://bbgolfer.hubpages.com/hub/5-Tips … Golf-Slice

    thanks

    1. path-finder profile image70
      path-finderposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Well. You are missing a period at the end of first paragraph.

      "the most common one is an inappropriate set up"; here "set up" should be joined to "setup" I believe.

      "Even a slight deviation in this can cause the ball slice."; I am not sure if ball slice is a noun, but if it isn't then you could add "to" in between them.

      I can offer more suggestions if you like.

  2. freecampingaussie profile image30
    freecampingaussieposted 4 years ago

    Congratulations on your first hub. It looks helpful for golfers. Why not join in the forum "Reccommend another hubbers hub "for more viewers etc . Reccomend a hub from the last one on that forum.

    1. bbgolfer profile image70
      bbgolferposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks, I didn't get you point, would lease explain more. Thanks

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    Ben Blackwellposted 4 years ago

    It looks pretty good.  Just make sure you are consistent with spacing.

 
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