My first from scratch HubPage. Looking for feedback

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  1. JackieBlock profile image85
    JackieBlockposted 9 years ago

    Hi everyone,

    I am a Squidoo transfer and yesterday I made my first hub while I was waiting for my lenses to transfer over. I was told that this was the place to get feedback from experienced hubbers so I will put out my first attempt at a hub for you critique. I appreciate any feedback you may have for me as I am still learning what HubPages can do.

    My hub is http://jackieblock.hubpages.com/hub/Hea … men-Dinner

    Thank you in advances for taking the time to look. I appreciate your efforts on my behalf.

    -JackieBlock

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    1. WryLilt profile image88
      WryLiltposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      I'd work on the title. It's unlikely to rank highly in Google with such competitive words. Add in some words as to why this is a SPECIAL ramen, such as ingredients that others don't use, etc. Check out Google suggest for ideas.

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    2. Pico Triano profile image88
      Pico Trianoposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Looks to me like the writing is good and so are the visuals. I'm sure there are a lot of technical things that could be done to make things better. I think it's a good hub in my inexpert opinion.

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    3. Glen Kowalski profile image93
      Glen Kowalskiposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      I'm far from an expert but I second the idea of breaking up the text a bit.  Otherwise a great recipe hub.  The style is awesome-I think eventually I'm going to offer cooking tips for my fishing hubs (though us southern folk tend to cook a bit less healthy big_smile).

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  2. ecogranny profile image84
    ecogrannyposted 9 years ago

    I'm new to HubPages, too, so can't give feedback from that perspective, but I do subscribe to the theory that shorter paragraphs keep attention online better than long blocks of text.

    I loved your recipe and pinned it.

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