I'd like feedback on my Hub: Asian Barred Owlet at Bangphar Non-Hunting Area Cho

  1. relache profile image88
    relacheposted 2 years ago

    "The underside of the fuselage is white and white vertical striped long haul up the chest a mess."

    No part of an owl is a fuselage.  You either need to learn more about owls or more about writing in English.

    1. WriteAngled profile image90
      WriteAngledposted 2 years ago

      "The author are visited this area several times until one day I have lucky time to meet with the robber, escape the hot sun under trees and still stand so that a stump, it has only head turn around."

      Have you put an existing article through spinner software to get results like this?
      Spun articles are not permitted here.

     
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