I'd like feedback on my Hub: Appreciating Your Pastor With Prayer

  1. D L Roderick profile image80
    D L Roderickposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Appreciating Your Pastor With Prayer. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Peter Grujic profile image83
    Peter Grujicposted 2 years ago

    In general, it is very good. The topic certainly fits with the categories. I think you should proofread a little more. For example, you said Red Sox 'are'- it should be Red Sox 'is' because Red Sox, as used here, is a team- a single unit- therefore singular. Example 2: you write baseball has 'their pastime'- it should read 'it's pastime' since baseball is a regular noun, not a pronoun. I would also recommend making it a little bigger/longer. I go through my articles on a regular basis and many times find "mistakes" I missed when I proofread it. These are only suggestions, I am no expert by any means- keep up the great job - everything in life is a learning experience no matter how accomplished we may be. Good luck!

 
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