I'd like feedback on my hub: Fender Blues Junior III review

  1. Adam Harkus profile image60
    Adam Harkusposted 24 months ago

    Hi,

    I'm trying to improve the content of my hubs with more detail now, and would like to know your thoughts...

    http://adamharkus.hubpages.com/hub/Fend … III-review

    Many thanks

    Adam

    1. chasmac profile image97
      chasmacposted 24 months ago in reply to this

      It looks good to me. Apart from a couple of typos, it's well written and it's a very fair hands-on review covering the positives and negatives. I especially like the features list as you've included a lot of info that can be seen at a glance, which is useful. You seem to have covered everything, so I don't know what other content you would need. Great Hub.

  2. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 24 months ago

    The review looks great.  My only suggestion would be to put the Amazon module for each product next to the place in the text where you first mention it.

 
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