I'd like feedback on my Hub: How Firewall Protects Your Computer

  1. sharmaakash profile image60
    sharmaakashposted 22 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How Firewall Protects Your Computer (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 22 months ago

    The problem is poor English grammar.

    "But what exactly does firewall mean? What does it mean? Lets find out."

    This should be "What does a firewall do? (the second What does it mean? is redundant and unnecessary) Let's find out."

    "A firewall is a a software ..." a is repeated.

    There are numerous other grammar issues that will keep this piece from passing QA

  3. Rebecca Burg profile image83
    Rebecca Burgposted 22 months ago

    This is a good subject and important to any computer user. Maybe explain more details or show examples (especially for non-technical person like me) of what the firewall settings look like on the common operating systems.
    Maybe also list examples what can happen if a firewall isn't working and how to know if it's not working.
    Thanks for sharing your technical know-how, I need as much help as I can get when it comes to computers...:-/