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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Religion and Philosophy

  1. markeleazer profile image77
    markeleazerposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Religion and Philosophy. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Jesse Drzal profile image97
    Jesse Drzalposted 2 years ago

    Your paragraphs are really chunky. Just kind of reads likes a big run on sentence with a bunch of commas. Some grammar issues as well. Hope this helps. Keep at it!

    1. paradigmsearch profile image91
      paradigmsearchposted 2 years agoin reply to this

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      I like you. But you really need to be <snipped> with.

  3. Jesse Drzal profile image97
    Jesse Drzalposted 2 years ago

    I like you too, paradigmsearch.

 
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