It would be more compelling if you used photographs you actually took with this camera and your personal experience. Also you are not allowed to have more than two links to any one source. You have more than one link to Amazon. Why not try a product capsule?
Thanks a lot theraggededge. I did not realise that what i did was something unacceptable. but i did not copy the content in my Hub from anyone or anywhere. what should i do? should i just unpublish this Hub? this is my first time to write so i really need a lot of advice. and i do appreciate all your criticisms. i am much obliged.
thanks so much for the criticisms. will do my best to become a better writer. bear with me as this is my first time writing and publishing an article online. i do admit that i still need a lot of improvement. your advice is highly appreciated. shall i just unpublish my Hub and rewrite everything in it?
Why don't you write about something you know? Where you live, or a review of an item you own, or a 'how to' on something you can do well? What do you know about that other people do not? What unusual experiences have you had? Your education? Family? What do you read? What's your day job?
I bet you can find lots of genuine topics to write about.
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