Hello,
I would love feedback on my first hub.
Thanks so much!
http://hub.me/akifl
Hi, and welcome to HP!
Nicely done hub, but I would add the word "How" in front of "Parents" in the title.
Also, even when you use your own photos, you need to accredit them. You should also say something about each photo as well.
Accreditation lets the public know whether the photo is being legally used and gives credit to the website or photographer from which it came.
Otherwise, good job!
Welcome, Lucy. You are off to a good start with a good topic, the use of multiple subheads and evenly spaced out photos.
I suggest making your photos larger so they display across the entire width of the article to increase visual appeal.
Use shorts paragraphs of one or two sentences apiece. Ease of reading is a factor in search engine rankings.
Any chance you can embed a video or poll? Maybe the poll asks how much time parents spend helping their children prepare for testing day.
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