I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Positive Thinking Habit for Gorgeous Life (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
I'm afraid your English needs some work. For example, the first sub-heading, "How human brain work-"The stimulus"" should be "The Human Brain Works by Stimulation".
Even though your English is good enough to allow you to be understood if you were speaking to someone, when writing for an English-speaking readership, it should be almost perfect.
Make sure your images are legal to use.
If you quote studies, as in, "Research has shown that 95% of negative thoughts or feelings..." then provide the source of the information, otherwise your writing lacks credibility.
I hate to be "that guy" but... the awkward English in the title alone is a dead giveaway.
I think you should proofread your article once again. Some deeper digging sentences are also required to nourish your content.
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