I'd like feedback on my Hub: Secrets To Living An Anti-Aging Lifestyle

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    Joybynatureposted 20 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Secrets To Living An Anti-Aging Lifestyle (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Your English is quite good but a little stilted. Try reading your hub out loud and see if you can make some improvements.

      The main problem that I see is that there are no 'secrets'. Everything you write about is very general. You have to remember that your hub will be competing for traffic against sites with much greater authority. Women's magazines cover this topic continuously, and they all have an online presence. This means your hub will never attract a decent amount of traffic.

      If you are going to write content like this, then you have to make it authoritative, special, unusual and worth sharing.

      Make sure you have permission to use the image at the top of the page, i.e. it should be Creative Commons licensed.