I'd like feedback on my Hub: United States of America (USA)

  1. allplacesmap profile image60
    allplacesmapposted 21 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub United States of America (USA) (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image99
    Rupert Taylorposted 21 months ago

    Somebody has to break it to you, and it might as well be me. Your use of English is not good enough.
    Your opening phrase is "United States of America, also called as U.S. is located in North America continent comprises of 50 states.."
    It should read "The United States of America is also called the U.S. and is located in the North American continent; it is comprised of 50 states."
    Poor grammar aside, this is hardly new information, and much of the rest looks as though it's been lifted from an almanac. HubPages is only interest in original content.
    "The gambling centre of the world in the southern Nevada features mega casino hotels with lavish decoration attracts the tourists." This is filled with grammatical errors and it isn't even accurate. Macao has a much bigger gambling profile.
    Your pictures are also a problem. None of them are credited so we cannot know if they are in the public domain.
    I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but until you develop a better mastery of English your Hub will not be approved.