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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Normality and Deformity

  1. Ae Clane profile image72
    Ae Claneposted 19 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Normality and Deformity. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Sherry Hewins profile image97
      Sherry Hewinsposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      Throw this one out and start over. I can't see anything there worth saving.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image100
    Rupert Taylorposted 19 months ago

    First, this is copied and pasted from another posting you have written elsewhere. This does not fit with HubPages requirements.

    Second, the repetition makes my eyes glaze over, so I had no idea what you were trying to say.

    Third, the article is way short of the 700-word minimum HP recommends, and while the title is "Normality and Deformity" it seems to focus on hypocrisy; the word is repeated at least 20 time in three paragraphs.

    The content is so abstruse that I have no idea how it can be fixed into original and informative material.

    Apologies for being blunt, but you need to know.

  3. Ae Clane profile image72
    Ae Claneposted 19 months ago

    Thank you for the reply, Rupert Taylor.

  4. Ae Clane profile image72
    Ae Claneposted 19 months ago

    Thank you for the reply, Sherry Hewins.

 
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