I'd like feedback on my Hub: Why I Blame Instagram For Ruining My Life

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    queenkeepsit100posted 20 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Why I Blame Instagram For Ruining My Life (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      The only reason I can think of is that it is more of a blog post than an article. HubPages is a dedicated article writing site, not a blogging site.

      Some suggestions:

      Move an image up to the top right of the intro.
      Make your intro shorter and snappier - break up those big blocks of text.
      Check your text for typos and grammar.

      Read the Learning Center for guidance.