I'd like feedback on my Hub: A guide on how to educate children using neurologic

  1. RuRu Zhen profile image61
    RuRu Zhenposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub A guide on how to educate children using neurological science and brain development (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      I'm afraid your English language skills need some work. The wording is very stilted and awkward.

      Here's one small example: "a lot of child has become orphan..." should be, "many children were orphaned..." Your tenses right the way through the hub are muddled. As are your singular/plural nouns.

      You could try a few things: the best would be to have an English speaker go over your hub and help you make corrections. Another might be to paste your text into Word or similar and have the grammar checker pick up what it can. You can also try reading your hub out loud and see if you can recognise where improvement is needed.

      Good luck