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I'd like feedback on my Hub: How did Earth get its water?

  1. Bari Hanafi profile image76
    Bari Hanafiposted 18 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How did Earth get its water? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Some spelling and grammar issues. Paste your text into a word processor and use the spelling and grammar checkers.

      1. Bari Hanafi profile image76
        Bari Hanafiposted 18 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks for the suggestion, theraggededge!

    2. Sherry Hewins profile image98
      Sherry Hewinsposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      I think it's an interesting subject. I think that, in addition to the grammar issues others have pointed out, you could use more common terms. For example, accrete . I had to look that one up to know what you meant.

      Perhaps explain what it means the first time you use it.

      1. Bari Hanafi profile image76
        Bari Hanafiposted 18 months agoin reply to this

        Great suggestion. Thank you for your comment, Sherry!

  2. lovetherain profile image81
    lovetherainposted 18 months ago

    It's nice to see science articles on HubPages. I enjoyed this one.

    A few grammatical errors, but that's already been pointed out.

    Good job!

    1. Bari Hanafi profile image76
      Bari Hanafiposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you lovetherain! I am glad that you enjoyed it, I'm still working on the grammatical errors now.

  3. Bari Hanafi profile image76
    Bari Hanafiposted 18 months ago

    Hi All,

    I just had my first Hub featured! Thank you for all the suggestions!

 
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