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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Sole Trader, Partnerships, Private Limited Company

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Ashish Dadgaaposted 14 months ago
Hi Hubbers,

I am fresher on Hugpages.
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Sole Trader, Partnerships, Private Limited Company and Public Limited Company in the Context of Construction Organisatio (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
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  theraggededgeposted 14 months ago in reply to this
  Your English needs an upgrade. You are missing out 'the' and 'a' (definite article and indefinite article) right the way through.
  
  For example: "He keep all profit." should be "He keeps all the profit."
  
  https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Article_(grammar)
  
  You are also mixing up 'there', 'their' and 'they're'.
  
  http://www.wikihow.com/Use-There,-Their-and-They're
  
  You could use an online grammar checker, such as Grammarly, or you could have a fluent English speaker/writer go through your hub for you.
  
  Otherwise, it's quite an informative hub.
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  Ashish Dadgaaposted 14 months ago in reply to this
  Thank you very much Bev for your constructive feedback.
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  vink21778posted 14 months ago in reply to this
  Hey I don't see any problem ,your hub is perfectly structured , but make sure to add videos and pictures and one of my hub was rejected due to 3-4 grammatical mistakes.Make use of Auto Grammatical corrector softwares they may be paid or free.
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  theraggededgeposted 14 months ago in reply to this
  You might not see any problems, but HubPages QAP certainly does, so telling someone their hub is perfectly structured isn't helpful. If it was, it would have been approved.
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  Ashish Dadgaaposted 14 months ago in reply to this
  Thank you Vink.
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