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Is this article too technical for chocolate?

  1. TessSchlesinger profile image98
    TessSchlesingerposted 15 months ago

    http://hubpages.com/health/Cocoa-Chocol … ine-Effect

    I've mentioned various studies and given their links. I've also mentioned chemical names like theobromine which most people don't know about (I don't think). The reason I'm wondering that if because I'm not sure that people would search for that when looking for chocolate. On the other hand, chocolate is so oversubscribed that because I was interested in theobromine and it was unusual, I put it in.

    Thanks.

    1. Ashish Dadgaa profile image62
      Ashish Dadgaaposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      No, I don't think it is too technical, instead, it is very informative and full of knowledge.

      Why? What happened?

      1. TessSchlesinger profile image98
        TessSchlesingerposted 15 months agoin reply to this

        Somebody asked me why I mentioned such long sounding words (on one of my feeds), and said that it made them want to skip reading it. But that comment made me think that people wouldn't search for theobromine which is what separates my article from other chocolate articles.

        1. Ashish Dadgaa profile image62
          Ashish Dadgaaposted 15 months agoin reply to this

          I do not agree with he/she. Whatever you have put it sounds perfect and it's a niche market article.
          theobromine is something unique, haven't heard or seen before. It will sure separate your article from other chocolate articles.

          1. TessSchlesinger profile image98
            TessSchlesingerposted 15 months agoin reply to this

            Okay, thanks. smile All that I wanted to know. smile

            1. Ashish Dadgaa profile image62
              Ashish Dadgaaposted 15 months agoin reply to this

              You be relaxed and make some changes, I am sure your Hub will be featured.

              By the way, Tess can I follow you?
              You are such a wonderful writer. I was reading your articles and you are so inspirational.

              1. TessSchlesinger profile image98
                TessSchlesingerposted 15 months agoin reply to this

                Thank you. On hubpages, you can just follow people. You don't have to ask. wink

                1. Ashish Dadgaa profile image62
                  Ashish Dadgaaposted 15 months agoin reply to this

                  You are welcome smile

                  Yeah I know that but to ask someone is respectable rather than just following them randomly. smile

                  1. TessSchlesinger profile image98
                    TessSchlesingerposted 15 months agoin reply to this

                    smile Well, thank you. I am flattered.

 
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