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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Why are our societies turbulent?

  1. writejt profile image82
    writejtposted 16 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Why are our societies turbulent?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 16 months agoin reply to this

      Hi writejt,

      Here are my suggestions to improve your hub:

      Break up the text into several capsules with relevant sub-headings. https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … iting-Tips

      Write Your Title in Title Case. https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … ndly-Title

      Credit and link to the source of your images. In fact only one of your images seems relevant to the title - they are abstract and they don't help get your points across. https://hubpageshelp.com/media/Learning … -image-use

      Describe what you mean by 'turbulent'. One person's turbulence is another's normality. What is the problem you are addressing? What are you trying to teach us?

      It's worth knowing that HubPages prefers factual articles to opinion pieces. Opinion pieces rarely attract traffic unless they appear in a high profile  publication. It all seems a bit 'woolly' as though you are writing words for the sake of it. Your conclusion isn't very convincing and I didn't really learn anything. Can you make the hub less abstract and more factual?

      Hope that helps.

      1. writejt profile image82
        writejtposted 16 months agoin reply to this

        Great advice, thanks

      2. writejt profile image82
        writejtposted 16 months agoin reply to this

        I have tried to improve my hub, incorporating your advices and observations. Thanks, once again.