I'd like feedback on my Hub: Atheism in Spiritual India

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  1. Maqbool Masi profile image67
    Maqbool Masiposted 19 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Atheism in Spiritual India. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. simplehappylife profile image84
    simplehappylifeposted 19 months ago

    Hello, Maqbool smile

    The first thing I see is the lack of imagery.  When writing a hub, you always want to add an image at the very top of your article (one that depicts the general topic).  A wonderful place to use free, high-quality commercial use images is pixabay https://pixabay.com/. 

    Second, while the hub is well-written, there are certain grammatical errors and missing words in many of your sentences.  You might consider using a program like Grammarly to help you clean up your work, https://grammarly.com.

    Other than that, I think you're on the right path.  It's a fascinating topic, and your writing style is well-developed.

    I hope that helps smile

    1. simplehappylife profile image84
      simplehappylifeposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      My own articles are featured hubs; you might want to swing by and check out a couple of them to see what I mean in regards to imagery.

    2. Maqbool Masi profile image67
      Maqbool Masiposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your suggestion. I will do it...

      1. simplehappylife profile image84
        simplehappylifeposted 19 months agoin reply to this

        You're Very Welcome smile   and Welcome to Hubpages!  smile

        You'll also see that I usually add an image in each capsule section (an image that is associated with that particular topic being discussed).  People like media rich articles and media plays a big part in whether or not your hub will be featured.

        1. Maqbool Masi profile image67
          Maqbool Masiposted 19 months agoin reply to this

          Nice, let me see

          1. simplehappylife profile image84
            simplehappylifeposted 19 months agoin reply to this

            One more thing, this below is a hub from the hubpages staff, on how to write a stellar hub smile  Well worth the read smile

            https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … tellar-Hub

            1. Maqbool Masi profile image67
              Maqbool Masiposted 19 months agoin reply to this

              Thank you very much for your help. I have made changes as suggested. Would you please have a look?

              1. simplehappylife profile image84
                simplehappylifeposted 19 months agoin reply to this

                You're Welcome smile  I can tomorrow.  I just came on here for a second.

              2. simplehappylife profile image84
                simplehappylifeposted 19 months agoin reply to this

                Hi Maqbool smile

                I went to go re-read your hub for you and it wasn't there sad

                1. Maqbool Masi profile image67
                  Maqbool Masiposted 19 months agoin reply to this
                  1. simplehappylife profile image84
                    simplehappylifeposted 19 months agoin reply to this

                    You might want to check your link, there's nothing there sad

 
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