I'd like feedback on my Hub: Football Legend Roosevelt

  1. Jill Weinlein profile image83
    Jill Weinleinposted 12 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Football Legend Roosevelt "Rosey" Grier. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      calculus-geometryposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      The hub is interesting, but it would be better to write it in the typical style of a biography rather than a numbered list.  Some of the list items are only a single sentence.  There's also a table with blank rows.

      There are also some grammatical errors and typos.  For example, you wrote "person friend" which I assume is supposed to be "personal friend." You wrote "Roses" where you meant "Rosey."  Proofread it a little more.  A second set of eyes will catch mistakes you miss.

  2. Jill Weinlein profile image83
    Jill Weinleinposted 12 months ago

    Thank you so much for your eagle eyes and suggestions. I agree 100% with what you recommended and have made the changes.

    You are terrific!

    Jill

 
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