I'd like feedback on my Hub: 8 Things you will need to understand about motherho

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  1. Wade Rowe profile image60
    Wade Roweposted 8 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 8 Things you will need to understand about motherhood and Depression (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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  2. Rupert Taylor profile image79
    Rupert Taylorposted 8 years ago

    Some issues

    Your title is too long and should be in Title Face. I was always taught never to start a sentence with a number, but that rule may have changed since the days of manual typewriters, or, in my case, quill pens.

    There are some grammar/style problems:

    . let us address whether or not your issue is critical? Should start with a capital letter

    Just keep in mind you've got a large amount of bodily hormones and feelings dashing about your system presently - presently means "in the future," you should use "at present"

    The tiny azure emotions - when someone refers to having the blues it doesn't reference a colour so the substitution of azure is inappropriate.

    checklist down below  - down is redundant, below is down.

    There are other similar errors that need to be fixed. Try running your article through a program such as Grammarly.

    Your image need to be credited and they should be licensed for use through Creative Commons.

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  3. Wade Rowe profile image60
    Wade Roweposted 8 years ago

    Thanks

      i will publish my work somewhere else. Good luck Hubpages.

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    1. theraggededge profile image73
      theraggededgeposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Was that a flounce out the door?

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        calculus-geometryposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        I'm getting a whiff of imortalone...

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  4. Wade Rowe profile image60
    Wade Roweposted 8 years ago

    No just butt-hurt like crazy.

    I will make the corrections necessary

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  5. daydreams profile image68
    daydreamsposted 8 years ago

    You have also repeated the same content twice about steps when to seek your doctor's advice.

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  6. Wade Rowe profile image60
    Wade Roweposted 8 years ago

    thanks
    Got it

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