I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Feminism and human rights? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
As it stands, the hub is kind of a jumbled, stream-of-consciousness opinion piece. What opinions in general need are organization and context. What I mean is, you need to present some of the history of feminism, such as the gains in women's rights--which I personally think should be juxtaposed with some of the resulting losses--leading up to some kind of definite point or points.
Actually, your point is unclear. I think you are saying something kind of along the lines that when someone is assaulted, it is not a feminist issue but a criminal justice issue. But again, I'm not sure what you're trying to say.
Your first sentence has some problems. There is no internal logic to it; the two clauses are not related to each other. I am not aware that most people are always fighting about feminism; if you have proof that this is so then cite it.
"In this era most men and women are always fighting because of "feminism" and mistakes it with human rights, but can you really understand what "feminism" and " human rights" is?"
Even though the sentence makes little sense it is grammatically incorrect - mistakes should be mistake and is should be are. There are many other grammar errors in the piece.
The article is also way too short and lacks any images.
You need to spend some time at the Learning Center https://hubpageshelp.com/
Do you mean Sallymaylee's unfeatured hub? Can you not see it if you click the link she provided?
No, I have never been able to view any of these unfeatured hubs requesting feedback by clicking the link to it.
Okay. Now I can view it from this page. I've never been able to before.
This is an interesting topic but, is way too short to post as a hub. I'd like to read more and have you expand on it. Also run it through a grammar checker. Good luck!
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