I'd like feedback on my Hub: My Lessons From Life Part 2

  1. Duane Herring profile image67
    Duane Herringposted 14 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub My Lessons From Life Part 2 (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 14 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Duane,

      Firstly, you've published the hub in the category of 'Health self-help'. It is in the wrong place so wont be approved for that reason. It needs to be in Creative writing.

      Secondly, it's a biographical account - while there is nothing wrong with that, it isn't the kind of article HP is encouraging. It's more suited to a personal blog. HP is looking for useful informative articles that attract search traffic.

      Thirdly, the formatting needs work. Most people access the internet these days on their phones and mobile devices, so when they are faced with big blocks of text they tend to reverse straight back out. Therefore, break up your text into smaller paragraphs and capsules. Add one or two relevant, legal-to-use images and even a bulleted list, if possible.

      Hope that helps.

      1. Duane Herring profile image67
        Duane Herringposted 14 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you.  I appreciate it.

 
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