I'd like feedback on my Hub: Darkness as you didn't know

  1. AalilechHisham profile image60
    AalilechHishamposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Darkness as you didn't know (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 7 months ago in reply to this

      Hello Aalilech,

      Try working on your punctuation. There is never a space before a comma. The pronoun 'I' is always capitalised and never written as 'i'.

      Make sure your image is legal-to-use and add the source link in the image capsule.

      You will find lots of information about creating hubs here: https://hubpageshelp.com

      1. AalilechHisham profile image60
        AalilechHishamposted 7 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for reply Mrs,
        I did what you asked me to do.
        I wonder if you can look at it again ?
        If you could find other errors to correct them, I would be grateful.

 
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