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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Atlantis, The Palm - Key Facts and Figures

  1. Ibad Rehman profile image50
    Ibad Rehmanposted 9 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Atlantis, The Palm - Key Facts and Figures (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 9 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      You have rewritten the text from the Atlantis website. At best your hub won't be approved and, at worst, if it is approved you could be sued for plagiarism.

      Have you actually been there? If so, rewrite your article from your own experience. If you haven't been there, then why are you writing about it?

      1. Ibad Rehman profile image50
        Ibad Rehmanposted 9 months agoin reply to this

        It is more like a fact sharing hub, and not about my personal experience at Atlantis. I am new here and thought I could share facts/figures about a place.

        Thanks for your help smile

        1. theraggededge profile image99
          theraggededgeposted 9 months agoin reply to this

          The point of travel hubs is that the writer shares their experience of a place.

          It is a good idea to write about what you know, rather than re-purposing other people's work. Write about your own locality and your own experiences - I'm sure they will be far more interesting than the Atlantis resort. Be real.

 
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