I'd like feedback on my Hub: A hope of amnesty from poverty.

  1. Vuyo Nkabinde profile image61
    Vuyo Nkabindeposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub A hope of amnesty from poverty. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image97
    Rupert Taylorposted 6 months ago

    There are several issues with your Hub. Your headline should be in Title Face and the period/full stop eliminated.

    There are grammar problems

    In my view: poverty is not a disease that should still exists [exist]. We can fly to the moon and back. We can make smart phones that send messages to millions of receivers in a [the not a] space of a second. The only thing we are guilty of, especially us nations that live in democracy [especially democratic nations], is the lack of equal opportunity.

    You Hub is too short. 700 words is the minimum. 1,000 to 1,500 is better.

    Images must be free of copyright restrictions and should be credited to the source.

    All of these issues and many more are covered in the Learning Center https://hubpageshelp.com/

  3. Vuyo Nkabinde profile image61
    Vuyo Nkabindeposted 5 months ago

    Thank you very much.

 
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