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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Essential Indicator For Every Investors

  1. williamlim96 profile image60
    williamlim96posted 16 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Essential Indicator For Every Investors (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. LouCannon profile image84
      LouCannonposted 16 months ago in reply to this

      I just went to read it and it was no longer published sad

      1. williamlim96 profile image60
        williamlim96posted 16 months ago in reply to this

        i will republish it again smile
        have a look smile

    2. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 16 months ago in reply to this

      Your title is incorrect. It should be "Essential Indicators for Every Investor". See the difference?

      'Indicators' is plural; 'every investor' is singular. If you got rid of 'every', then you could keep 'investors'.

      1. williamlim96 profile image60
        williamlim96posted 16 months ago in reply to this

        Thanksss

  2. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 16 months ago

    Your grammar needs a lot of work.  As the only indicator you use is identification of trends with a moving average, that should be what the title says.

 
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