I'd like feedback on my Hub: Importance of the bass guitar in modern music

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    kshas3posted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Importance of the bass guitar in modern music (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      There are several issues that are preventing your hub being approved:

      Put your title and sub-headings into title case.

      Write a proper introduction to the article.

      The bass guitar is not *the* most important instrument in a band. It is *one* of the most important.

      The article is too short.

      You have sub-headings but the writing that follows them doesn't connect to them. For example 'Great Bassists'. Where are they?

      The sweetwater image is probably copyrighted.

      More help at the Learning Center: https://hubpageshelp.com

      Hope that helps.

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        kshas3posted 7 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks a lot for your inputs. I will work on these.

 
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