I'd like feedback on my article: The 10 Best Sights to See in Paris

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   johnsimon01posted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: The 10 Best Sights to See in Paris

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      Eurofileposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      First of all, don't be disheartened. The QAP is a challenge for us all. We've probably all been in your position before. I certainly was.
      The content of your article is good. It just needs a few minor changes to the structure.
      My suggestions would be:
      Move the eye-catching Eiffel Tower photo from lower down to the top.
      Add a text capsule after the opening photo to introduce the article. Maybe explain why you have decided to write about this subject.
      Follow this with an index, listing your numbered points. Editors like indexes, as readers can scroll to points of particular interest for them.
      Get rid of the bold text. Editors don't like it for some reason. Shorten your subtitles and use the HP text capsule headings instead.
      Consider using a HP map capsule near the end to locate all your places of interest.
      Finally put a closing comment/final thoughts at the end to draw the article to a close.
      I hope this is of some help.

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         johnsimon01posted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you so much for your support, really appreciate it

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   CMHypnoposted 4 years ago

   Hi johnsimon01, you need to look at your sentence construction and grammar.  Maybe also pad out the information.  For instance, the Louvre is a vast museum with a fascinating history, so maybe deserves more than a couple of lines?  Also the way you have formatted your points and their headers could use looking at.  Paris is a very saturated topic on the net, so a general article like this would need to be high quality and in-depth to rank and gain traffic.  Good luck

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      johnsimon01posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi CMHypno that’s great help thank you

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   Do you have permission to use the photos that you didn't take? If so, you should indicate this in the source box. If you don't have permission to use the photos, you should delete them or use a substitute that has a suitable license.

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      johnsimon01posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Alicia yes I know thank you for this

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