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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Parenting - Deep concern for every children

  1. jkaur36 profile image62
    jkaur36posted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Parenting - Deep concern for every children. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. jkaur36 profile image62
    jkaur36posted 7 months ago

    What improvement s needed in this article..? Is it not up to the mark.

    1. chasmac profile image98
      chasmacposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      A quick glance showed you have far too many English errors - starting with your title. The word you need is "Child" not "children". (and "concern" should be "Concern".)

    2. ketan pande profile image27
      ketan pandeposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Please proofread your article, there are many mistakes of periods and commas. You can use Grammarly to check grammar mistakes.

  3. theraggededge profile image100
    theraggededgeposted 7 months ago

    The text reads as though it has been run through an online translator. It's very bad and will never be approved in its current state. HubPages requires a fluent level of English so, without a great improvement, this may not be the right place for you to write.

 
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