I'd like feedback on my Hub: Shine out depression, for you are a light of the Lo

  1. Alise Schmitt profile image77
    Alise Schmittposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Shine out depression, for you are a light of the Lord. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image87
      Jeremy Gillposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi Alise. You may have long since passed the QAP but I figured I'd chime in anyway. Your Hub is already well written. There are some long bodies of text, but your block quotes help divide it. Still, a few more pictures or methods of division could make the lengthier portions more accessible.

      Still, it's already impressive. Best of luck.

 
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