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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Importance of Awareness among Indian Parents regard

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    Speechologyposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Importance of Awareness among Indian Parents regarding Disability (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. ketan pande profile image77
      ketan pandeposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      Work on your grammar. You can use Grammarly to improve, and please try to elaborate it.

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        Speechologyposted 4 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you so much sir

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image92
    FatFreddysCatposted 4 months ago

    Your title is too long (not search friendly) and the article itself is too short. A couple of images to break up the text would be a big help.

    You've got some awkward English happening as well. For example, this bit:

    "I have been seeing the population since almost 8 years."

    ...only 8 years? Were you living on top of a mountain by yourself, with no contact with other humans, before then?

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 months ago

    You should spend some time at the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/  to discover what it is that HubPages is looking for. Unfortunately, it is not looking for the kind of article you have produced. It is a platform for writers and demands near-perfect English usage, and yours, at present, is not of a good enough standard to get published here.

 
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