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I'd Like feedback on my article...Let's Talk About Sex.

  1. tinahanna7 profile image75
    tinahanna7posted 6 months ago

    I wrote this article to provide helpful tips to parents about talking about sex with their kids. Would someone mind going over it an making sure it reads right? Thank you in advance...https://hubpages.com/family/talkingsexwithkids

  2. psycheskinner profile image83
    psycheskinnerposted 6 months ago

    It seems to me that the actual topic of the hub is "How to convince your child to remain celibate/a virgin".  Currently I don't think the content matches the title.

  3. theraggededge profile image98
    theraggededgeposted 6 months ago

    "Use your imagination on how to detour your child into thinking having sex young is a good idea."

    You might want to rephrase that smile

    Remove the exclamation points from the title.

    Run your text through Grammarly - there are a few grammatical and typing errors, missing spaces, that sort of thing.

    You missed out the option of getting a good book on the subject - for both parents and child. My method was to leave an appropriate book in their room and tell them I was available for questions... and that was it. I think mine found out all their life-lessons via The Simpsons and Friends big_smile

    1. tinahanna7 profile image75
      tinahanna7posted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you.Yeah, that does sound a little weird.

  4. paradigmsearch profile image91
    paradigmsearchposted 6 months ago

    Does Amazon sell those inflatable dolls? Could be a perfect Amazon link. Of course after the editors are done ROFL, they'll probably delete it.

    Sorry, couldn't pass that one up. big_smile

    1. tinahanna7 profile image75
      tinahanna7posted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Not for sure but a funny thought. Oh maybe a picture book with pop ups....LOL.

 
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