I'd like feedback on my Hub: Travel Pulau Seribu Island

  1. kepulauanseribu profile image57
    kepulauanseribuposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Travel Pulau Seribu Island (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image93
    FatFreddysCatposted 5 months ago

    Lovely pix but the writing is total gibberish. Find a native English speaker to edit your work and it might have a shot at passing quality inspection.

 
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