I'd like feedback on my Hub: What are the cyber-security issues an organization

  1. Pawar Nilesh profile image61
    Pawar Nileshposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub What are the cyber-security issues an organization should be prepared for and how? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 3 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      The title is too long and should be written in title case (Google it, if unsure)

      The first sentence is horrible.  I had no clue what the hub was going to be about. There's no proper introduction that relates to the title.

      English grammar is not up to HubPages requirements. Try running the text through an online grammar checker.

      The article requires proper formatting using multiple text capsules.

      You can't advertise your services or include a phone number. 

      Remember you are writing for a worldwide audience.

      Hope that helps

      1. Pawar Nilesh profile image61
        Pawar Nileshposted 3 months ago in reply to this

        Hey there, Thank you very much for your response. That is very much helpful. Will make the necessary changes.

 
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