I'd like feedback on my Hub: Bullying: A Challenge to You and Your Children

  1. srirad0675 profile image91
    srirad0675posted 4 months ago

    Dear friends,

    This hub, which I thought would help many parents worldwide by creating awareness about bullying, is not featured. Bullying: A Challenge to You and Your Children. Please help me do what I'm expected to do. Thank you!

  2. John Welford profile image95
    John Welfordposted 4 months ago

    It's a good piece of work that is unfortunately spoiled by some instances of poor grammar and sentence construction - presumably your first language is not English. There are also a few obvious typos, such as "Aamong". Sort out these problems and you'll be fine.

  3. srirad0675 profile image91
    srirad0675posted 4 months ago

    Thank you John.

 
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