I'd like feedback on my Hub: Don't Gamble on real Estate Crowd Funding

  1. kanchan2079 profile image60
    kanchan2079posted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Don't Gamble on real Estate Crowd Funding (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Sherry Hewins profile image95
      Sherry Hewinsposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      I think it's a very good start on a hub. I see a couple of places where you left out the word "the," and one instance where you needed an s on the end of a word but overall the writing is good. Real needs a capital R in your title.

      Maybe you could explain a little bit about what The JOBS act and Regulation A+ are and why they've had an effect on crowdsourcing. Also may an actual example of a crowdfunding deal gone wrong.

      Hubpages likes to see at least one high quality picture in a hub. You could have a picture of a real estate development, someone sitting at a computer looking anxious or maybe a slot machine or roulette wheel. Those are just a few suggestions off the top of my head.

 
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