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I'd like feedback on my Hub: 7 Little Known Ways that Ease Back Pain Quickly

  1. yogaburnclub profile image85
    yogaburnclubposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 7 Little Known Ways that Ease Back Pain Quickly (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      There are some grammatical errors throughout the hub. This is the final paragraph:

      "One of the renowned practice that reduces stress in your mind and body is yoga. When regularly practices it helps the body to become more tuned and respond well to certain activities. It improves range of motion, flexibility as well as protect body injuries."

      "Yoga is renowned for reducing stress in mind and body. Regular practice helps the body to become more tuned and able to respond better to activity. Yoga improves the range of motion, flexibility and helps protect the body from injury.

      Make sure the capitalisation of your sub-headings is consistent.

      Remove the star ratings capsule - that's only for recipes and might prevent your hub being approved.

      Hope that helps.

      1. yogaburnclub profile image85
        yogaburnclubposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks I am doing it again and would like love your comments

        1. yogaburnclub profile image85
          yogaburnclubposted 2 months ago in reply to this

          please have a look now http://hub.me/alfth

 
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