I'd like feedback on my Hub: How to get into a good mood when you feel low

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  1. vinud profile image61
    vinudposted 18 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How to get into a good mood when you feel low (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. techwindow profile image72
    techwindowposted 18 months ago

    Remove unnecessary spaces and use proper heading tags. Also, read your own article before you hit publish.

    1. vinud profile image61
      vinudposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks. That was helpful.

  3. SSS1942 profile image68
    SSS1942posted 18 months ago

    A lot of unnecessary spaces are given in this hub. Please remove it. The hub is informative.

    1. vinud profile image61
      vinudposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Hello, I am glad you like it. And thanks for the help.

  4. pen promulgates profile image59
    pen promulgatesposted 18 months ago


    For the titles, use the title case. (for both of your articles)

    In the the beginning you wrote, 'being sad make your life' it should be makes your life..

    Your write you feeldown it should b feel down.

    In close your social media point, the verb are is missing in 'if you sad'

    You end it in nope, then? - it looks weird and incomplete. Even the line it boasts a world of half reality seems funny.

    In open your drapes, the line 'the world outside. In which you are just a part of it.' it should be one sentence I guess. No period is necessary before in.

    In go out of house point the line 'When you feel sad, hopelessness. Your house cries with you' the sentence construction is not parallel.
    Better is when you feel sad or hopeless... Or when you feel there is sadness and hopelessness...

    In play with your pets points, you wrote, 'Not that I like animals but I couldn't manage one in my constant travels.' you mean like animals or dislike animals?

    Hope these help.
    Good luck.

    1. vinud profile image61
      vinudposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Hello pen promulgates, I cannot thank you enough for your time. Your generosity overwhelms me. I totally agree with your observation and should be careful in future. Thanks again for your help. Hope your guidance in future too.


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