I'd like feedback on my article: Modern Synths and Communicating Design of...

  1. brandequity profile image60
    brandequityposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Modern Synths and Communicating Design of Basic Sampling (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Welcome to HubPages.

      I took a look at your article but couldn't really understand it.

      It's missing a proper introduction. You need to lead in with what the article is about and why people should keep reading, what aspects of synths you are going to address. It's your chance to grab the reader. Personally, although I know nothing about the topic, I'd start by referencing the plethora of synth music in the 80s. Then once you have that reference point, you can move on from there.

      Some sentences don't make sense. Read them aloud, and you'll see. Here's an example:

      This is the very first sentence, "The great panel of selection or classy midi control. "

      "More importantly, the ambiguity of how a synth should be tinkered with from the inside out leads one to conceptual markings." I have no idea what you mean by 'conceptual markings'.

      'Instancing' is not a word.

      Your pixel art image bears no relation to the content of the article, neither does the one underneath.

      You might want to spend some time at the Learning Center in order to get to know what HubPages expects in an article.


      Good luck.

  2. FatFreddysCat profile image98
    FatFreddysCatposted 7 months ago

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