I'd like feedback on my article: Self Made Recipes

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   RudraPratap2580posted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Self Made Recipes (must be signed in to view)

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   AliciaCposted 5 years ago

   Hi, Rudra. First, you need to change the title to show people that the article is about making plum jelly. The present title doesn't do this and is inaccurate because you've only included one recipe.
   
   "Book" isn't a valid source for a photo.
   
   You need to remove the bold print from the article. You also need to make the article longer and add additional text capsules. You could give some background about the recipe or the ingredients or describe how to sterilize the jars, for example.
   
   The ingredients shouldn't be capitalized. The title of the ingredient section should be plural. You have a spelling mistake in the last line. You should think about how to state the quantities of the ingredients carefully. For example, pectin may be sold in packets of different sizes in different countries.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 5 years ago

   You haven't visited the Learning Center. I suggest you do.  https://hubpageshelp.com/

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   Kenna McHughposted 5 years ago

   Linda provides excellent advice. I recommend you study HP guidelines because it is clear you haven't yet. Most of us here are professional writers and adhere to strict guidelines given by HP. 
   http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

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   RudraPratap2580posted 5 years ago

   Thank you sir..i try to best writting articles .

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      "Thank you sir..i try to best writting articles ."
      
      Your English is not yet up to the standard Hubpages requires.
      
      Can I ask you where you learned about HubPages? Because whatever you've been told about this being a place to earn money by writing, it's not true.
      
      It might be a good idea to go back to that site or forum or Facebook group and explain they are misleading people.
      
      Also, I see you have published another 'recipe'. It will never be approved. You have not understood the advice you have already been given by Alicia.

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   CYong74posted 5 years ago

   The quality of English within the hub differs greatly from his bio and responses. I wonder why ....

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      That's because it's been copied from https://www.tasteofhome.com/recipes/wild-plum-jelly/
      
      His latest Watermelon recipe comes from:
      https://newhobbyblog.wordpress.com/2015 … elon-soju/
      
      So I think we can say bye bye to this person.

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   CYong74posted 5 years ago

   Lol. Why ain't I surprised....

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