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I'd like feedback on my article: The BoyBest Freind

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    Kiyah1016755posted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The BoyBest Freind (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 4 weeks ago

    You have many spelling errors and other technical mistakes in the language. Also I think this should be in the category "creative writing".

  3. watergeek profile image91
    watergeekposted 4 weeks ago

    I agree and I don't even need to read the article. For example, how do you spell "friend"?

  4. pen promulgates profile image80
    pen promulgatesposted 4 weeks ago

    I somehow read the whole story. The ending is unclear.
    If you use an app like Grammarly, it should correct all the spelling errors. Still, you need to work on punctuation and grammar. Proofread for readability too.

 
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