I'd like feedback on my article: True Devotion For The Two Of You

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   Lady Guinevereposted 2 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   
   Nope did everything that anyone from the hug this is with a new name and still get the freindly message but this time it says I have Spammy Stuff in it.  NO SPAM in my Article.  So ftustrated and done wothj this stuff!
   Here is my article: True Devotion For The Two Of You

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      AliciaCposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      “Spammy” sections are usually links. Perhaps you could remove the links, especially the second one? Writing the first linked section in regular text might be helpful, too. If doing these things doesn’t help, you could delete the first link as well. Don’t give up. The article looks better each time I see it.

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         Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         I just deleted both links and if that does not work I will take my hub and post it on my Quora page and deleyte it from here.  See I don't make money doing this as I do not have an Amazon account anymore.  They screwed me over and I don't like them and left.  Facebook did aslmost the same things when I was there and you cannot talk ro thm about hy you are being picked on.  Durn people.  I showed my sewing machine and got a weird message saying it was not a good thing for me to do and got banned for who knows how long.  So had to quite there period.

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         Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         That did not work and I have the two links open on my computer.  I was thinking that peaople or readers would want to know what I was talking about....but I am guessing there is a problem with added information that they wanted in the first place.  HUBpgaes need to get their rule on all moderators right and straight.  I don't understand when they want something and I post it in my article and then they don't want it ir it comes up as smammy.  I know what spam is and how I added those twwo links was not spam at all.  Thjey confuse people doing that.  It isn't just me but some people I knew here are no longer writing here anymore and they are goo writers and have now written elsewhewre.    Will wait until tommorow morning to see what they decide and if it is something else then I will post this on my Qupra Page and sorry to say will not post anything else.  Too durn confusing!

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            Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            sorry for the typo husband called in the middle of me writing.

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               Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

               Soooooo they have no idea what a new paragraph is for but we can add and new text box?  That is Crazy, Stupid!

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                  Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

                  I did just add the link to the Handfasting back in an you know what.....It isn't counting!  FTS!

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      vocalcoachposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      A couple of suggestions:
      
      1.  Use bullets when listing ideas/suggestions.
      2.  Place the videos further apart throughout the article.
      
      I hope this helps.  Great to see you again.

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         Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         I know what they want and what a new pparagraph is for and they have it all wrong!

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         Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         I added the other link to a new text in my article and at this point I have no idea what their problem is.  Nice to see you again too.  Nice to see the others that I left still here!

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      OldRosesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      You have many inappropriate capitalizations.  The only words that should be capitalized are the first words in a sentence and proper nouns, such people's names, city and state names, etc. 
      
      You should also work on your bio.  It is very negative.  You should emphasize your expertise in the topics that you are writing about rather than complaining about your experiences writing online.

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         Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Didn't realize I did that.  This is me new not the old me.

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         Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         For some reason I cannot add a bio to my profile.  Can you tell me the inappropriate Caps I have in my article?  Please!

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      Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Yep!  I just checked out my hub and it is NOT saving any of my changes.  THAT is a HUBPAGE PROBLEM!!! Do not know how to get around that!

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         Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         What I am seeing and what tiy are seeing is very different.  Things are not saving it would seem.

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         theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Are you saving the changes at the top of the editing page?
         
         You can change your bio here: https://hubpages.com/my/profile/profile
         
         I'm going to suggest this one last time. Go to https://www.grammarly.com and set up a free account. Make sure to enable it in your browser, It will pick up the most obvious errors as you type or paste the text into HubPages.

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            Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            That is exactly where I am trying to change my profile and it gives my real name and has a box where I can add my bio but won't let me type anything in there.
            AGAIN I changed the typos and spelling and I had my husband even look at it and tell me what he saw and he only saw two errors. 
            Yes I an talking about the EDIT Done Editting aT THE TOP OF THE done editting PAGE.

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            Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            I did get Grammarly and just used it.  Thanks, Bunches

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               theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

               That's great. Congratulations on getting it featured!

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      Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      They don't like links period!  Here what they say about spammy elements:
      Links
      
      Articles should be written for readers, not for search engines or backlinks. Even an article that appears high-quality on the surface can still be considered spam.
      
      The following are examples of spammy links:
      
      Misleading or keyword-rich anchor text (e.g., “We only employ the most qualified and experienced Locksmith Dallas.”)
      Links to pages that are not related to the subject matter of the article
      Links to pages that contain information that is substantially similar to what's in the article
      Links to pages with window confirmation boxes that interfere with site navigation or redirect users to unwanted websites

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      Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Good News!!! It has been featured!!!  Thank Goodness!

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         AliciaCposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Congratulations, Debra!

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   Rupert Taylorposted 2 years ago

   We've been here before and numerous suggestions for improvement were made, but you don't seem to have acted on them.
   
   Spelling errors such as "Love And Marriage Theme Somg From "Married With Children." It's song.
   
   Capitalization problems such as "Back Bone" remain unchanged.
   
   The misattribution of the origin of "Love and Marriage" hasn't been fixed.
   
   So, I ask myself "why bother offering help if it's going to be ignored?"

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      Lady Guinevereposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I have done them.  Spelling errors and Puncutation and Caps all have been done too.  I republished it after I did thos erro fixes so not so sure they are taking.  Not my fualth there as well.  The spell checker tht I did use was the one on here in doing the hub.  Stopped using that one and did the check by myself without the help of that that does not work properly.  I changed the song video too and took out those words period.  Don't offer anymore help then for things that I DID and you seem to not even see them

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