I'd like feedback on my article: What is an Optical Fiber

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    Automobile 180posted 13 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article What is an Optical Fiber (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. pen promulgates profile image79
    pen promulgatesposted 13 days ago

    I am afraid your article doesn't make sense to me.
    Your sentences are a little incomprehensible.
    The sentence construction is weird too.
    There are grammar issues as well.
    Good luck.

  3. wilderness profile image94
    wildernessposted 13 days ago

    You're keyword stuffing pretty badly; the use of "optical fiber" 6 times int he first paragraph, and 36 times in the hub, is way out of line.  Cut it back to 2 or 3 times in the entire hub.
    Looks like a copy/paste from some other source, and the spacing didn't make it across.  Big blank areas everywhere, in the center of sentences.

 
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