I'd like feedback on my article: Tweaking the Sales Process with Superior Data..

  1. DataCaptive profile image48
    DataCaptiveposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Tweaking the Sales Process with Superior Data Services (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Self-promotion not allowed at HubPages smile

  2. pen promulgates profile image42
    pen promulgatesposted 4 weeks ago

    I like the article, but as Bev has mentioned, the article is promotional.
    You can take off the outgoing link to datacaptive.com.
    In a capsule at the end, you can mention about the resources without Linking them.
    Also, sometimes sentences are missing punctuation.
    Hope the images are legal to use even if you have cited the source!
    Good luck.